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Monday, October 17, 2011

From the Ashes Pt. 3


From The Ashes

By RandomSlasher (Trilliah)

*Review of Part Three*



Summary: When Merlin uses magic to save Arthur's life, he is condemned to death, and Arthur is too late to save him. But when the grief-stricken prince, along with Morgana and Gwen, journeys to Ealdor to return Merlin's ashes, a series of strange events leads them to believe the warlock may not be as dead as they thought.

Rating: NC17

Couple: Merlin/Arthur



Read it here and don't forget to give Trilliah some love!



In the third part they, once again, turn to books for help and as before, they offer little to no help. Morgana in her infinite wisdom, and well her connection to the druids and all, says she's going to ask the Druids for help.



…Yeah.



I don't know whether this is a good idea or a bad idea. Bad things tend to happen when Morgana meets with the Druids. Just saying.



I'm put at ease, however, because Arthur offered to go as well. Hopefully things'll work out and they'll get some answers that will help them get Merlin back…or, you know, Arthur will have another dream and Merlin will say it's a bad idea.



These guys just can't win.



At least Merlin told Arthur why he didn't like the idea of him going to the Druids. And, God, it's just so freaking fluffy and cute and cuddly that I'm cooing like a fangirl. *siiiigh*



“I don’t care one fig about what’s best for Albion,” Merlin said, frowning. “I care about you, you prat.”



Damn…Trilliah's making it hard for me to dislike Mordred. He's so helpful and worried, and not like the show built him up to be. *siiiigh* Once again, I hope nothing bad comes from Arthur going to the Druids for help.



*wiggles*



Mordred could sense Merlin and it seems like the Druids do know something that could help. I say could because they seem very…hesitate to offer that help, but that could be because it's dangerous or something of the like.



Yeah, okay. Arthur has to give his life in order to bring Merlin back. Go figure right? So far I'm not sure if he literally has to die, as in no more Arthur, or if the Druids plan on killing him and then, you know, saving him.



Of course, it goes without saying, Merlin is not happy about this and doesn't want this ceremony/ritual to be performed. But Arthur being Arthur, won't hear anything against it because, well, he wants Merlin back. Even if it costs him his life.



This, of course, leads to Merlin angrily throwing himself at Arthur and, well, you'll have to read to see what happens next. :D



“You understand why I have to do this.”



“Yes,” Merlin mumbled. “That doesn’t mean I have to like it.”



You know. I just realized that Mordred was prophesized to kill Arthur in the series, and the story's holding to this canon. Guess who's helping perform the ceremony that'll kill Arthur to bring Merlin back.



…Oh yeah, you guess it. And if you did it, you'll have to read. Ha ha ha.



Mordred smiled, looking pleased, and nodded in a gesture of acceptance. Then, lifting his hand, he murmured a word, and the wood around Arthur spontaneously caught fire. Arthur fought a slightly hysterical urge to laugh. Looks like Merlin was right: Mordred is going to kill me.



If you could see my face right now, you'd be laughing at me. Or cringing in sympathy because that wasn't a cool, amusing joke. *siiiigh* So far, though, things are going well with the appearance of Arthur's mother. I'm assuming he's "dead" or in limbo or some fluff like that.



Enter Merlin and suddenly I think that earlier mention soul-bond was just formed. I've learned that everything is mentioned for a reason and nothing is ever mentioned to just be mentioned. It's fun finding the earlier placed eggs and seeing how they form the story.



*squeals*



It worked! :D The insane ceremony/ritual thingy worked! And, while Merlin and Arthur are going through their real-world reunion, I'm wondering what they'll say to Uther to explain Merlin's reappearance…



Merlin blushed, ducking his head again. “I still can’t believe you went to all that trouble for me,” he said, looking down at the ground between them.



“Of course I did,” Arthur said, leaning forward again and tipping Merlin’s face up so the other man’s eyes met his.



“Why?” Merlin whispered, searching his face for an answer.



Arthur simply smiled, leaning forward to kiss Merlin softly. “Because I love you,” he murmured as he drew away, looking into Merlin’s eyes again.



And this, ladies and gents, is where I'll leave you. If you want to know the conclusion of From The Ashes, then I strongly suggest you read the story. It's the perfect bit for any Arthur/Merlin lover out there.

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

From The Ashes Pt. 2


From The Ashes
By RandomSlasher (Trilliah)
*Review of Part Two*



Summary: When Merlin uses magic to save Arthur's life, he is condemned to death, and Arthur is too late to save him. But when the grief-stricken prince, along with Morgana and Gwen, journeys to Ealdor to return Merlin's ashes, a series of strange events leads them to believe the warlock may not be as dead as they thought.
Rating: NC17
Couple: Merlin/Arthur



Read it here and don't forget to give Trilliah some love!



Rolling into Part II after a short break in reading to get some writing of my own done and I'm wondering how Arthur will react to the question Hunith bestowed upon him at the end of the last part. Hm. Only one way to find out. *reads*


…Okay, so Arthur has magic now. I just thought Hunith was, well, I dunno what I thought but I wasn't expecting Arthur to come down with a case of magic. Now I really wonder how this all connects back to Merlin.


You know, I wonder how Uther would react to discovering that Arthur has powers. Not that it's been brought up into the story yet, I'm not even sure if it'll be covered at all, though that doesn't stop me from being curious. He'd still kill Merlin for saving Arthur's life with magic, would he kill his own son for having magic too? Hm. Something to mull on for the time being.


Arthur has magic, Merlin's magic in fact, and Gaius is teaching how to use it, though Arthur's failing miserably and hasn't used magic outside of his visions of Merlin's memories (see? I know what to call them now :P). Anyway, Arthur discovers why he can't use the magic through another one of these visions and, really, the answer is quite simple and remarkable.


*silence*


*crickets chirp*


What…? Did you think I'd tell you why he can't use Merlin's magic? Ha! Yeah right. Read the damned story already and you'll find out! :P So, anyway, he finds out why he can't use the magic and then he rushes to Gaius to relay his discovery.


And, I have to say, upon discovering why he can't use Merlin's magic, Arthur turns into a freaking school girl. It's cute. It really is. And it's the first bit of hope we've seen since Merlin actually died. It shows how much Arthur actually cared about Merlin and how happy he is to realize his connection to Merlin now. How Arthur's, in a way, keeping Merlin alive.


You know I always find it amazing how Gaius (and others) turn to books to answer all of the odd happening surrounding Merlin, even though there isn't another magician exactly like Merlin. So really, they'd have nothing to go on.


Gaius does, however, discover something in a book that might help them. A soul-bond. Though the criteria of one doesn't exactly match what has happened between Arthur and Merlin, but at least there's hope now. Hope wasn't something they had before.


Upon this latest discovery, we're beginning to glimpse more of Arthur's feelings, though he still isn't directly showing them. I say this because of how Gaius explains a soul-bond:



“A soul-bond?” Arthur frowned, squinting at the pages. “What does that mean?”


“It means two people who care for one another very dearly may choose to join their lives in more than simply the traditional sense,” Gaius told him.



What Arthur is experiencing may not be a soul-bond, but he doesn't deny nor say anything about Gaius' explanation. At least, not yet.


*snickers*


Okay, it's sad that Uther could see something between Arthur and Merlin when Arthur couldn't, though honestly I don't think his apology will do anything to endear him to Arthur. If fact, I think it'll enrage him all the more.


Or he'll just have no idea what Uther's implying. I'll blame that on the fact that he's still getting over Merlin's death and then discovering the connection between his dreams, the magic, and Merlin.


I love Morgana. Why? Because she's always ready to tell Arthur the truth no matter how much it might hurt him or how hard it is to say or hear. She really is a strong character and I love seeing her working together with Merlin and Arthur instead of against them.



“Arthur.” Morgana shook her head. “Merlin is…was…?”


“Is,” Arthur stated firmly, and Morgana nodded.


“Merlin is in love with you.”


Arthur stared at her, wondering if he’d heard her wrong. “I…what?”


“Merlin is in love with you. He has been for…I don’t know how long. Ages. Probably since that time we all went to Ealdor, if not before.“



Arthur's reaction is very realistic when he hears this. He has difficulty believing it, to the point of denying it all together. Even going as far as saying that Merlin was interested in Gwen, though Morgana can easily counter this. In the end, Arthur needs time to process this new bit of information and come to terms with finding out about Merlin's feelings and, I think, he also needs to come to term with his own feelings even if he's doing so unconsciously.



“Of course,” she said again, backing up a few steps, smiling. “And Arthur?”

Arthur lifted his eyebrows, looking up at her.

She grinned. “Go easy on him, when you do talk to him?” she said. “He’s not the first person in the world to fall in love with someone he knew he couldn’t have.”



Wow!


The story goes from Arthur finding out about Merlin being in love with him to Arthur shoving one off while thinking about what it would be like to fuck Merlin. Nice. Not that I'm complaining or anything. Sure it was sudden, but it wasn't rushed. It was like everything that Arthur hadn't realized about Merlin before had suddenly made itself known and while he was exploring the idea, things turned sexual.


He tosses off and then is filled with an overwhelming sense of heartbreak because he realizes that what he had in his fantasy isn't something he can have in real life. Simply put, he's missed his chance.



But it was bittersweet pleasure, mixed with a deep pain. No matter how he could imagine Merlin now, he would never know how Merlin might really respond to his touch. He would never know the feel of Merlin writhing beneath him--would never get to feel the press of his lips against Arthur’s own, or feel the warm, slim weight of him in his arms. He had missed his chance, and even if he could somehow reach him, he would still be simply a presence in Arthur’s mind. Preferable to never seeing or speaking to him again, of course. But certainly no substitute for what they’d had--and what they might have had, if Arthur hadn’t been so blind.



And, wouldn't you know it. Arthur's realization might've been the reason he finally found Merlin awake. I should've seen this coming, because that's how these things work out, right?


What's even more interesting is that Merlin doesn't seem to know what he's where he's at (he doesn't even realize that he's not in the physical world that he's in Arthur's dreams). I had expected him to wake up and admit that he had known this would happen all along and that there was an easy way to fix the problem, but wouldn't you know…he doesn't even know he's dead.


Oh no.


He thinks Arthur's dead! *shakes head* It's so Merlin that it's beautiful!


Other things happen, obviously. Epic things, I mean Merlin punches Arthur, but you'll have to read the story to find out why. Of course when Arthur wakes up, guess what he realizes carried over from the "dream". Oh yes, the punch. :D Obviously, whatever the dream world is…it's real.


After making this discovery, he rushes off to tell Gaius and the others. Before he does this, however, he decides to dump over Merlin's ashes. Desecration aside, he and everyone else realize that the ashes are missing something. Something that might prove that Merlin never was really burned. The ashes are just that: Ashes. No human bones or teeth or any other remains.



“Ashes,” Arthur repeated, looking at Gaius, who was frowning at the pile on the table, and then at Hunith, whose eyes were beginning to dawn comprehension. “Just ashes. No bones, no teeth. Ashes. Gwen, you’ve worked forges--how hot does a fire have to be, to destroy everything of a man?”

 “Far hotter than it would ever burn on a pyre,” she said, confusion and hope sparking in her eyes as she looked at the pile of ashes, then at him. “What...?”

 “This isn’t him,” Arthur said, grinning so broadly his cheeks ached. “It’s just ash. Burned wood, maybe some of his clothes. But Merlin didn’t burn.”

 “But...if Merlin didn’t burn...” Gaius frowned, looking up at him, eyes going wide.

“Exactly,” Arthur said, beaming at them each in turn as they stared at him in dawning comprehension.

Merlin isn’t dead.



And thus ends the second part of From The Ashes, join me in the third part and read the flipping story ASAP!!

Monday, August 29, 2011

From The Ashes


From The Ashes
By RandomSlasher (Trilliah)
*Review of Prologue and Part One*



Summary: When Merlin uses magic to save Arthur's life, he is condemned to death, and Arthur is too late to save him. But when the grief-stricken prince, along with Morgana and Gwen, journeys to Ealdor to return Merlin's ashes, a series of strange events leads them to believe the warlock may not be as dead as they thought.
Rating: NC17
Couple: Merlin/Arthur



Read it here and don't forget to give Trilliah some love!



Merlin, admittedly, is a new obsession of mine. I've been reading fanfiction since, maybe, May-ish? But this is not the first time I've encountered this plot and, honestly, I try to avoid stories like this one because character death makes me wibble. However, I'm giving it a try since I haven't ran across a Merlin fanfiction that I haven't fallen completely and irrevocably in love with.

This fanfiction is long. Extremely long. It tops out at over 40k words, so you might want to clear your schedule before sitting down to enjoy this one since it's all one chapter, though the chapter is broken down into parts which makes for easier reading and bookmarking.

The story opens with Merlin's execution; he's been caught performing magic. The magic, in turn, saved Arthur's life. Uther, however, isn't going to let that fact stand in the way of him murdering another sorcerer.

The scene of his, Merlin's, death is descriptive and heartbreaking. He is as anyone would expect him to be; he doesn't want to die, but he's content to because Arthur's safe. As quoted in the story, Arthur’s life was worth a thousand of his.

After Merlin's passing, we learn about what really had happened to Arthur that caused Merlin to perform the magic that would lead to his demise. As always, Arthur was engaged in a battle with a magical creature that could easily kill any mere mortal without the aid of a wizard such as Merlin.

Arthur wakes up and, immediately, notices that something is off. He's completely alone and his wounds are completely healed. He soon finds out, however, that Merlin saved his life using his magic (of which he did not even expect, which is a nice break from the cliché in the fandom) and then he rushes off to defend Merlin's abilities to his father without knowing that Merlin's fate had already been decided and carried out.

He finds out, from his father, that Merlin's execution was carried out that morning. Arthur is, in a single word, devastated and his opinion of his father changes within that very instant. He runs away, in disbelief, but soon he sees that there's no denying it. Merlin is dead.



The pyre that held the last earthly remains of his best friend.



Arthur sees the pyre and knows, beyond the shadow of a doubt, that Merlin is gone. Morgana and Gwen are there to comfort him and collect Merlin's ashes to ensure his mother is able to give him a proper burial.

Upon entering Part I of the story, we're beginning to see Arthur slowly, but surely realizing what he's lost in Merlin's death. He's mourning and, maybe, still in denial and hopeful that he'll turn around and see his departed friend. We also glimpse a window, though slight, into Arthur's feelings for Merlin.



He wasn’t usually a physically affectionate person, but Merlin had always called up the desire for contact: a friendly punch to the shoulder, a tousle of his hair, a supportive hand on his back. Maybe he’d just wanted to assure himself of Merlin’s presence. All he knew was his arms literally ached to hold him in the one way he’d never allowed himself before. He hated himself for being too proud to embrace Merlin when he’d had the chance.



The trio of Arthur, Morgana, and Gwen start their journey to Ealdor to bring Merlin's remains to his mother. Things start out uneventful, but you as the reader know that things cannot and will not remain as such. Arthur ruminates over Merlin's recent passing and the effect it has had on not only himself, but others.

Guilt rears its ugly head and Arthur curses Merlin's unwavering loyalty to him, all the while realizing just what Merlin had done for him and how much he believed in Arthur. He's worried now, that he will be unable to fulfill Merlin's high expectations, but finds himself wanting to all the same.

Gwen, as always, is the voice of reason. Kindly, but sternly guiding Arthur and helping him through this difficult time because, sometimes, Arthur needs a push. We all know this, and it's what endears us to him. He's not a character without his faults.

He's still obviously in denial, though it isn't about Merlin's death. It's about what Merlin was to him. Arthur's still stubbornly holding on to the fact that Merlin was nothing more than a servant to him, though it's obvious that there's more to it than that.

Arthur's also being plagued by odd daydreams, or dreams, or memories, or whatever the hell they are. We're as clueless as Arthur, though I think we both can tell there's something strange about these memories. The memories, as far as I can tell, finally reach a head when Arthur dreams about Merlin performing magic as a child and when he wakes up…well, you'll have to read the story to see what he wakes up to.

Hunith reaction to Merlin's death is what any parent's would've been when faced with the same situation. She's devastated. The scene where Arthur tells her is heartbreaking in more ways than one because you see Hunith's despair coupled with Arthur's.

When she finds out the circumstances of Merlin's death, a full two days later since she's locked in a state of grieving, she surprises Arthur with not blaming him for her son's death. She surprises Arthur, but honestly, I was expecting it. We saw in the series that she was aware of Merlin's, and by extension Arthur's, destiny.

She doesn't blame Arthur, though it's clear that Arthur still blames himself.



Destiny?” Arthur repeated. “You think this...Merlin’s death...you think it was destiny?” His voice was nearing hysteria, he knew, but he couldn’t help it. This was so far from what he’d been prepared for, he honestly didn’t even know how to process it.

 “Merlin believed it was,” she said firmly, meeting his gaze unflinchingly. “He knew it was his duty to protect you. He told me more than once he would trade his life for yours if it came to it. I simply hoped...” She bit her lip and trailed off, but there was no missing the flash of disappointment in her eyes as she gazed at him.

 Arthur swallowed hard, nodding. “You hoped I’d protected him,” he said flatly.

“Arthur...”

 “No,” he interrupted her, shaking his head. “You’re right. I should have protected him. He was obviously too great an idiot to protect himself.”



I don't know about Arthur and the others, but I'm beginning to think that these memories just aren't the memories fabricated by Arthur's mind because he misses him. Why do I say this? He has another one after he passes out in Hunith's home after their confrontation about Merlin's death. This time he dreams (or maybe remembers) about Merlin and Nimueh, and there's a direct connection between the vision and what had just transpired between him and Hunith.

It's obvious that Hunith knows something, but what that something surprised even me and upon revealing what it is the first part of From The Ashes ends. Given the length of the story and of my review thus far, I've decided to review this part by part and post the reviews weekly, so keep an eye out for them and read From The Ashes when you have the time!

Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Homophobe Pt. 2


Homophobe
By YouarenotMe



Summary: Mike is a driven young man, hard working, and eager to please his father. But Mike Newton has a secret…perhaps he has a few. In a small town like Forks, Mike feels alone and desperately wants a break in his routine.
Rated: M
Couple(s): Mike/Eric, Mike/Edward, Jasper/Mike, Jasper/Mike/Edward



Read it on fanfiction.net and remember to give YouarenotMe some love!

 Read Starry's previous review on Homophobe here.


I know I've already reviewed this story, but I felt like I needed closure and in order to do so, I needed to share my thoughts on the last few chapters of this wonderful story. Homophobe is, looking back on it, unlike anything I've ever read before. And I'm not just talking about the couples, but the packaged deal.

This story gave me everything I needed and some things that I hadn't even realized I had wanted and now I'm left sad to see it end, but happy that I was lucky enough to go along for the ride. It's a story that I think every slash fan should read, even if they don't like Mike Newton or Mike/Edward.

Coming into this story, I expected a hot piece of Mike/Edward and, well, I got that, but I got so much more as well. I loved the dynamic presented between Mike, Edward, and Jasper and was very happy (even as I pouted) that Mike didn't end up with Edward. Edward and Jasper were the stepping stones to Mike's happily ever after and I loved how YouarenotMe captured that.

I think my favorite thing about the story was the conflict—the real life problems and insecurities of,  not just a gay teenager, but any teenager striving for acceptance from their peers and parents alike. I'm honored to have viewed Mike's personal struggles and then, finally, the absolution he felt in finding himself and realizing that he could be happy if he thrived to be the person he wanted to be.

Homophobe is probably one of the favorite stories of the year and I'm proud to add it to my favorites list on fanfiction.net!

Monday, August 15, 2011

If The Walls Were Too Thin


If The Walls Were Too Thin
By downjune


Summary: "I'm seeing another life," he said, "when I go to sleep."
Couple: Harry Potter x Cedric Diggory
Rating: R

 Read on livejournal.com and remember to give downjune some love!

Harry and Cedric are probably my favorite couple in the Harry Potter fandom and, as such, it's incredibly difficult to find good fanfiction for the pairing. I came across If The Walls Were Too Thin by downjune on the livejournal community, twoseekers (which is a Harry Potter community dedicated solely to Harry Potter and Cedric Diggory), and I immediately bookmarked the story for later reading.

I finally got the time to read it today (while cooking dinner because I'm multi-talented like that) and literally got caught in fangirl mode for awhile. I still internally squeeing over how amazing this story is and, honestly, I don't know if I'll stop any time soon.

If The Walls Were Too Thin opens up in an AU/canon verse where Cedric didn't survive the last task of the Triwizarding Tournament, but not everything happened like it did in the canon verse. Harry's twenty-one and has a job at the Ministry (I want to say he's an Auror or Auror in Training, but I can't be sure—actually, the job at the Ministry is just an assumption, don't take my word on it), he's also having these strange dreams.

No, no, not the strange dreams from the canon either. They're strange dreams about Cedric, more specifically the life Harry would've shared with Cedric had he survived that night. The more Harry has these dreams, the more he wants them to be real and the more they start appearing to be real—especially after Cedric realizes that dream!Harry isn't his Harry.

The buildup was nice and well paced throughout, seamlessly switching back and forth between Harry's realities until he finally wakes up where he's meant to be. The writing was wonderful, even with the few typos scattered throughout the story (these typos, though, are easily ignored) and it's even ended with a promise of a companion piece written in Cedric's POV. I will definitely be keeping an eye out for that.

    - Recc-er Starry Out! ♥

Sunday, August 7, 2011

Homophobe

Homophobe
By YouarenotMe


Summary: Mike is a driven young man, hard working, and eager to please his father. But Mike Newton has a secret...perhaps he has a few. In small town like Forks, Mike feels alone and desperately wants a break in his routine.
Rated: M
Couple(s): Mike/Eric, Mike/Edward, Jasper/Mike, Jasper/Mike/Edward


 I'll be straight up about when I first saw the buzz for this fic on twitter; I ignored it. Why? Easy, his name is Mike Newton and I do not like him. I don't like him, but do harbor a soft spot for Edward and Mike…in that order. Edward and Mike, Edward/Mike, as in Edward fucking the fuck out of Mike. But, Homophobe, is not EdwardMike. It's MikeEdward. Now, now, now. I know what you're thinking; "Silly Starry!! Where's the issue in Mike being dominate over Edward?"

*pauses* Do you hear yourself. Mike. Mike fucking Newton screwing Edward who's a vampire Cullen. My brain just exploded, but you know what? I read the story anyway. Cause that soft spot, remember? That and I promised myself I'd branch out more in the fandom…though I still haven't branched out into Jaspard and Carlward, one step at a time, right? Anyway

I started reading it and YouarenotMe blew me away with Mike's characterization. He was more than just that 2D teenage boy that lusted after Bella that Stephanie Meyer mass produced throughout The Twilight Saga. He had layers. He had goals and dreams, issues and problems, and secrets. He had those too. He was like any other teenage boy I knew while I was a teenager myself, which made me connect because it felt like I knew him.

I had goals and dreams, issues and problems, and secrets. I had those too, we all had those and that's why YouarenotMe wins this round for making Mike Newton into a human being. It was the characterization that pulled me in, but it was the trails Mike faced and how he dealt with them that kept me reading.

It's a given that he's go issues, it wouldn't be a story without come conflict. The biggest conflict present in the story, I think, is Mike vs. himself. He's denying who he is while trying to be what everyone wants him to be. It's sad, but so realistic. You can't help but to feel sorry for him and really applaud him when he does something for himself, even when it's getting head from Eric and then turning into an epic asshole who isn't gay.

Slowly, with help from Edward and Jasper, he begins to accept who he is and starts to deal with the fact that he gets hard for other men. Things come to a head when he comes out to his father and, well, he's got no choice but to turn tail and run after that.

And, trust me, once you read and see how his Dad is…you'll understand why.

Even after he's came out to his father, he still struggles with the fact that he's gay. The only time, I think, he isn't struggling with who he is is when he's with Edward and Jasper. It's obvious, painfully obvious in fact, how Edward and Jasper feel about Mike. Though, I'll admit that I sometimes wonder if Jasper's feelings are as powerful as Edward's towards Mike.

Then, of course, we've got Mike's feelings towards them. He feels something for them, yes, but he's struggling with the feelings he's realizing he has for Eric. In the end, he realizes that his feelings for Eric are…

…ha, ha, ha. You didn't think I was going to tell you, did you? If you want to know, I'll guess you'll just have to read, won't you?

Please keep in mind that Homophobe is an ongoing story. With that said, expect more reviews from me concerning up-coming chapters. Why? Because I can.

You can read Homophobe here at fanfiction.net. Remember to give YouarenotMe some love if you read the story!



EDIT: Remember those updates that I mentioned, well, one happened before I was able to post this review so I'll jot down my thoughts before I post this puppy!

First off, I've got to say, kudos to Mike for standing up to his dad. It was fan-fucking-tastic and made me fangirl hardcore. It seems like the issues with his father have finally come to pass and now he can focus on the rest.

More of his relationship with Edward and Jasper are revealed and we learn that he doesn't, in fact, feel the same for Jasper and Edward as they feel towards him. Well, I should say he doesn't feel for Edward as Edward feels for him. Which, I have to admit, is sad.

This chapter, however, left me wondering about Eric and Mike. It's obvious, by now, how Mike feels about Eric and I'm curious as to whether or not something will happen between them and if it does how it will pan out once Mike leaves for college.

This story is, really, wrapping up beautifully and I can't wait to see things come to fruition.